My Sweet Devil
You've found me wandering alone in your streets,
Lurking in the darkness, "Oh! What a treat."
Sing me a lullaby, my sweet Devil,
Put me under your spell.
Take me for a spin with your dazzling eyes,
Like we're at the carnival on a carousel.
Sink your teeth deep into my neck,
Whilst you defile my body's flesh.
Sing me a lullaby, my sweet Devil,
Paint me into something new.
Touch your lips to mine, poison me,
Color me in your favorite shade of blue.
Maybe devil likes to be in the dark midnight Blue sky, Hoping you might meet in the darkness so the spell might make him immortal.
ReplyDeleteIt's completely the opposite of what I had in mind while I penned this down but this is a fun interpretation. Thanks for sharing your insight stranger :)
DeleteThis is fresh, dark and deep. Nice portrayal of someone falling in love with a wrong person. And how the emotion of love is stronger than the instinct to survive. Damn girl. It’s quite graphic!
ReplyDeleteBabe!!!!!! You will not believe it, you're the only person who got it close to right about the premise of this post. Man! You know me so well (hint! hint!) :D
DeleteI’m glad I did!
ReplyDeleteEven if my eyes deny what they see, or ears pretend to go deaf when they hear you speak, I can feel those undertones and subtleties - loud and clear - like I am the only one you share your secrets with - even if you don’t.
I want to jot something down too - perhaps you will read it soon.
Wow, what you said hit hard.
DeleteI really hope you write something, I miss reading your work.
Here i am, the Devil in the dark, the one who defiles flesh and leaves his mark. It's always fun to read this stuff, seeing so much pain, looks like I have nothing to lose or for you to gain.
ReplyDeleteAnd the truth is, the darkness is eternal where i come from, it was a moment in life where i chose to be wrong. It was fate that made you fall for me, when you didn't know the sadness that was around me.
You always knew the Devil was in there and yet you chose to be so near,
It's not the devil that brought you pain, it's the troll you never knew was there. :D
You're such a goofball, haha.
DeleteI'm totally gonna make you my shadow writer next time!! :D